Tweak wording (#2186)

Oops, I cut a few too many words from my draft whilst tidying it up!
:sweat_smile:

Author: benjie

src/pages/blog/2025-10-16-graphql-local-initiative-update.mdx

@@ -22,8 +22,9 @@ We also have local organizers working to bring people together in **Białystok**
 
 ## We’ve heard you
 
-Feedback from organizers and attendees has been clear, so we're launching our
-2025 refresh of the Locals program:
+Feedback from organizers and attendees has been clear: you love the Locals
+initiative but there are still things that we can improve; so we're launching
+our 2025 refresh:
 
 - **Simpler applications:** Videos are no longer required — photos can substitute
   where needed