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content/operate/rc/databases/version-management/_index.md

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-description: Describes Redis Cloud version management policy, supported versions, and upgrade options.
+description: Describes Redis Cloud supported database versions and upgrade options.
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-Redis Cloud provides comprehensive version management that balances automatic updates for security and performance with customer control over major changes.
+Redis Cloud provides comprehensive version management that prioritizes customer control over major changes. 
 
 ## Redis version structure
 
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 | **Redis 7.2** | GA | December 1, 2029 | Essentials, Pro |
 | **Redis 6.2** | GA | 2026 | Pro |
 
-When a version reaches End-of-Life (EOL), Redis Cloud will automatically upgrade your database to the latest minor version during maintenance windows if you do not manually upgrade before EOL.
+When a version reaches End-of-Life (EOL), Redis Cloud will automatically upgrade your database to the following minor version during maintenance windows if you do not manually upgrade before EOL.
 
 ## Version selection
 
 When creating a database, you select the version (e.g., Redis 8.2). Redis Cloud automatically provides the latest patch version within that version.
 
-For existing databases, all upgrades must be done manually. See [Upgrade database version]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/version-management/upgrade-version" >}}) for more details.
 
 ## Manual upgrades