docs: improve grammar and flow in blog/elysia-10.md

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Summary by CodeRabbit

• Documentation
  • Improved grammar, clarity, and consistency throughout the blog post
  • Updated meta descriptions and alt text for enhanced readability
  • Applied stylistic refinements and punctuation corrections for overall polish

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Walkthrough

Editorial refinements to the Elysia 10 blog post, including grammar corrections, consistency improvements, punctuation fixes, and stylistic adjustments throughout the document. All changes focus on wording clarity and presentation without altering functional content or structure.

Changes

Cohort / File(s)	Summary
Blog Post Editorial Updates docs/blog/elysia-10.md	Grammar and clarity improvements, capitalization consistency, punctuation corrections, alt text refinements, sentence-level tense and plurality edits, stylistic consistency (e.g., "open source" → "open-source"), and minor wording adjustments across meta descriptions, narratives, and code documentation.

Estimated code review effort

🎯 1 (Trivial) | ⏱️ ~3 minutes

• Single file affected with homogeneous, cosmetic editorial changes
• Changes are repetitive in nature (grammar fixes, punctuation, consistency tweaks)
• No logic, functionality, or structure modifications requiring deep analysis

Poem

✨ A rabbit's quill dances across the page,
Polishing words with editorial grace,
Grammar gleams, punctuation sings bright,
The prose now flows with pure delight,
Elysia's tale shines ever so right! 🐰

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🧹 Nitpick comments (1)

docs/blog/elysia-10.md (1)

412-412: Minor style improvement: Consider using "will" instead of "going to".

Elysia is optimized for excellent performance, and while the current phrasing is natural, replacing "is going to be" with "will be" would sound more formal and certain in technical contexts.

Consider:

- and we believe that Bun is going to be the future of JavaScript.
+ and we believe that Bun will be the future of JavaScript.

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• docs/blog/elysia-10.md (16 hunks)

🧰 Additional context used

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docs/blog/elysia-10.md

[style] ~260-~260: To elevate your writing, try using a synonym here.
Context: ...ects) if not reviewed carefully and are hard to debug and observe. --- To fix this...

(HARD_TO)

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[style] ~357-~357: This expression is wordy and overused. Consider replacing it with a more concise and formal alternative.
Context: ... important fix that would have happened sooner or later to resolve these problems. In most cas...

(SOONER_OR_LATER)

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[style] ~412-~412: Use ‘will’ instead of ‘going to’ if the following action is certain.
Context: ...ling it offers, and we believe that Bun is going to be the future of JavaScript. We believ...

(GOING_TO_WILL)

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[style] ~431-~431: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...ode - Deno - Cloudflare Worker We also want to support the following: - Vercel Edge Fu...

(REP_WANT_TO_VB)

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[style] ~441-~441: ‘In the meantime’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ...: - Next.js - Expo - Astro - SvelteKit In the meantime, there's an [Elysia Polyfills](https://...

(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_IN_THE_MEANTIME)

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[style] ~535-~535: The word “free” tends to be overused. Consider using an alternative wording to strengthen your writing.
Context: ...e, make money, and not spend most of my free time creating a framework—but I didn't. The...

(FREE_TIME)

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[style] ~557-~557: Consider an alternative verb to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...ll not stumble upon the same problem we had? Someone needs to do something. That s...

(IF_YOU_HAVE_THIS_PROBLEM)

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[style] ~571-~571: The word “free” tends to be overused. Consider using an alternative wording to strengthen your writing.
Context: ...ng for a living and build Elysia in our free time. At one point, I chose not to look for...

(FREE_TIME)

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[style] ~575-~575: The word “free” tends to be overused. Consider using an alternative wording to strengthen your writing.
Context: ...need to support ourselves and have more free time to work on Elysia. We are just makers ...

(FREE_TIME)

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[style] ~577-~577: Consider an alternative verb to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...o create something to solve problems we have. --- We have been creating and experi...

(IF_YOU_HAVE_THIS_PROBLEM)

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[style] ~580-~580: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...ething to solve problems we have. --- We have been creating and experimenting a ...

(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)

🔇 Additional comments (5)

docs/blog/elysia-10.md (5)

14-14: Well-executed meta description updates.

The frontmatter descriptions now use more consistent terminology and clearer phrasing (e.g., "improved startup time up to 14x", "inline errors for strict type checking"). These changes improve both clarity and SEO metadata quality.

Also applies to: 18-18

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47-47: Opening narrative flows better with improved consistency.

The restructured opening paragraph and updated feature list now use more consistent formatting and phrasing. The list items properly reference section anchors and maintain parallel structure.

Also applies to: 49-49, 54-60

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77-77: Technical sections improved with clearer explanations.

Changes to the Sucrose section and related explanations now better articulate the hybrid AST/pattern-matching approach. The shift to "open-source" as a compound adjective is grammatically correct and consistent.

Also applies to: 82-82, 88-88, 90-96

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459-505: Notable Improvements section well-organized.

The improvements and bug fixes list maintains technical accuracy while improving consistency in formatting and terminology. Clear categorization into Improvements, Breaking Changes, Changes, and Bug Fixes.

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441-441: Afterword section has strong narrative coherence.

The personal section maintains the authentic voice while improving grammar and flow. The emotional narrative about motivation and sacrifice works well for a milestone release.

Also applies to: 510-510